JD gazed into the sky from a field of rolling grass. The night sky shone with stars from its usual darkness in the city. It relaxed JD...the stars were bright and beautiful. They were shiny....and...nice....and still....and.....boring after a while. JD frowned a little as he soon was tired of star gazing, he stood up and began to lift into the air, when a star streaked across the sky, A shooting star. ....I wish...That something exciting could happen. He muttered to himself as the shooting star shone brightly...a little to brightly. JD stared closely...a few more of the stars soon showed...then it occurred to JD what was happening. THOSE ARE METEORS! He yelled. They were giant flaming asteroids, heading for earth, and by the look of them, they would pound Earth out of existence. JD sprung into action.
He charged his brilliant green colored Ki into his hands and formed a nice ball as he charged towards the meteors, he was soon nearing space. He was ready to hold his ground against the fiery rocks of doom. He pushed his hands forward and forced energy out of the ball of Ki. EMERALD BLITZ!!! He yelled as blasts of Ki flew from the ball of energy, chipping away at many of the meteors, destroying about five. Alright...Five down......about fifty to go. He said as he engulfed himself in Ki and charged through the meteors, breaking most of them into the pieces. The saiyan quickly turned around with more Ki in his hand and fired it. EMERALD BLASTER!!! The concentrated energy blew through a few more of them, but many still hurtled forward, some of them passing him. If he didn't hurry it would be to late to stop them. I'M NOT GONNA GET BEAT BY SOME DUMB SPACE PEBBLES!!!
He charged at them. using his Emerald Blaster, over and over, blowing by three at a time. HA! HA! HA! JD blasted over and over, but they just kept flying by, JD was angered. I WON'T LOSE TO THESE ROCKS! He yelled as a purple aura surrounded him, it engulfed his body. TAKEO STATE!!!!!!! The aura over took him and made him more powerful, he charged at great speed, smashing through rock after rock. The pieces burned in earth's atmosphere and were turned into mostly nothingness. JD has one more meteor to deal with, this one was bigger than big. JD charged down to earth, smashing into the ground and readied himself. The dark energy around began to move from his body as he held his hand out. It began to gather into a large ball, His ultimate attack was ready.
BLACK HOLE BOMB!!!
He unleashed the ball of energy, it flew at the large asteroid....the blast disappeared with a twinkle in the sky......all was quiet as the meteor kept coming. JD smiled to himself.
..............................Boom.......................
A large explosion occurred in the, purple and fiery. The black hole bomb hit right on target. The meteors were no more, what was left of the energy and rock rain down to earth with a shiny twinkle as if it were glitter....JD had just about saved the world, he felt accomplished.
hmm....I guess wishes do come true
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Subject: Meteor Mayhem 
Sat Oct 01, 2011 8:05 pm
. I would like a little more description of your techniques tho, perhaps how they are performed. All in all I'd give it a 9.2/10